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All Deviations
All Deviations


We are both awake, although you
don't know this. You are putting
your burned CDs in alphabetical order
again, wearing a smile like a witch's

hat. A small white refrigerator
starts humming. A computer has
been humming. They are in tune;
they make a major sixth. This makes

you happy, like waiting for the busy
signal that comes when you hold
the handset to your ear for a few seconds
after the end of a long conversation.
©2006-2008 ~kingvitamin
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Another huge revision--this time of Tattoo.
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~illixim:iconillixim: Sep 10, 2006, 12:07:39 PM
Lovely. The linebreaks always make it... feel perfect.

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'to display my power, I ate a stool.'
~Ryan
~ifuwuraself-helpbook:iconifuwuraself-helpbook: Sep 10, 2006, 4:27:59 PM
This is wonderful! :boogie:

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It really is a shame about raisins

Often times I find myself wishing I could be a metaphor.

Satine says "YES. I NEED YOUR POETRY NOW!"
~cieli--blu:iconcieli--blu: Sep 20, 2006, 12:54:58 AM
This is just too good!!:excited:

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Someone drew a face on my Heart.
~parentheses:iconparentheses: Sep 20, 2006, 3:20:49 AM
I like this a lot, maybe even more than the DD. It feels so natural. :)